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36.I heard the music as i entered the room, but all that was there was were speakers playing some pretty good music. There was meant to be on but they left before it

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7. Icy wind slashed at he face and the rain danced its evil dance upon his head as he tried to get he bearings on the isolated beach. There was no one als at the beach he was going to jump into the water when he new that it was REALLY COLD but still he jump into the water. He didn’t come back he girlfriend went to find him but she could not find him she saw he hat on the top of the water she called for help they said that they would send a search team out to find him. 101 word

connors narritive 20/9

It was windy and the rope holding the bridge from falling had snapped and we had fallen into the disgusting swirling revolting water. Trevor had fallen into the water he classmates helped him up onto the bridge. He was shivering cold, his lips were turning blue and he was shivering. Everybody were slowly falling off the freezing cold bridge. It was just meant to be a trip to the watering hole to get water for some soup and they can't get to the watering hole where it was safe. They hated