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Today started with pure blue skies like everyday. I started work, im a poetry writer for the newspaper. The genes of this building is amazing, this building has been passed down through many generations of my family. We have a conductor who conducts what our poetry is about today. We have one big problem in this office is that all our wires are transparent so when we try to get one fix we don't know which one leads to what computer or output signal.
Nice but i think there should be more commas, but other than that its good.
ReplyDeleteNice work Connor. I noticed how you used a simile near the start. Next time maybe look at how you have your punctuation.
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